2009-01-29
Renhai Reflections 72: Reaching
Reaching
A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
A rakish figure
leans a ladder to the wall —
campus dorm. /jm
A soldier waits for luggage — /jm
the boy reaches for a hug. /vs
Enamel bathtub —
a black beetle tries
to climb up. /vs
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0118.htm
[Check the notes for the description of the incident that inspired this renhai.]
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10 comments:
Interesting, Masago
specially after reading the notes :)
wishes,
devika
stretching...
love this
john
I relate to the beetle.
I'd have been much like the beetle in the tub :) Good one!
did the beetle stow away in his luggage? (: notes
nice one
much love
gillena
Thank you all!
Pat, Janice: I'm with ya!
good one and interesting inspiration
I like the shift to the little fellow in the last part.
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