2007-09-07

Rengay Through the Seasons #1 [1-6]

by Masago: Rengay 1, Verses 1-6 (of 6)

A green sprig / pokes above the edge — eaves trough.
Leaves in the back yard, a frisbee almost buried.
Rear car window — "Wash Me" handwritten / in stuck-on dust.
Dirty dishes / spread on the kitchen table... vase of daisies.
A boy in his room — his stuff on the floor.
Red ants swarm / over a popsicle stick — driveway curb.

6 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

and on it does....

floots said...

love the sense of microcosm given in the final section
thank you

John McDonald said...

nice set vaughn
john

Masago said...

Thanks, guys.

Pamela said...

This is really great stuff masago!~

Masago said...

Pamela: Thank you, your comments are greatly appreciated.