by Karina Klesko (kk), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay 4, Verses 1-2 (of 6):
Autumn afternoon — rose petals cling / to the cemetery gate. /kk
Embracing at the door... an ebony hair on his shirt. /vs
Click here for the previous rengay in the series.
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7 comments:
Fantastic start! (Although I have to tell you that when I saw your initials, "vs", "Victoria's Secret" immediately came to mind. :) )
good lines -- I'm laughing about Aurora's comment! :)
a nice sense of intimacy developing
Good. ... I'm turning into a tree expert...!?:)
looks good
john
things are heating up :)
Aurora: *LOL*
Andrew: :-)
Floots: We'll see... :-)
Borut: *Hee, hee*
John: Thanks.
Polona: Yep... :-)
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