by Masago: Rengay 2, Verses 1-3 (of 6)
The faint thump / of a distant basketball — autumn evening.
Canola field horizon — a glint of setting sun.
That area / in Grandma's back yard — hint of mint.
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8 comments:
hear, see, and smell -- wonderful!
yes - that hint of mint is so evocative
A mystery story - I can hardly wait to hear the sequel...!?:)
lovely progression
john
Fantastic.
Late summer is what these evoke...so well.
Andrew: You are very perceptive. :-)
Floots: My grandmother actually had a little patch of mint at the side of the house. When we stepped out the back door we'd get an instant whiff.
Borut: Thanks (Rengay are not actually intended to be narrative but sometimes they work out that way). :-)
John: Thanks.
Aurora: Thank you!
GZ: Thank you very much.
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