by Masago: Rengay 5 (Sep 30 - Oct 6), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
Autumn morning — an old barn bites down / into the ground.
Abandoned farm truck... its door also in the box.
River valley — a rusted bicycle frame / lodged in an elm.
A small piece / of embedded barbed wire — tree trunk.
A yellowing telegram: "Coming Home Now".
Their initials / with nineteen-twenty-one — large, flat rock.
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7 comments:
Love the feel to this one.
now I'm melancholy
stunning end to this vaughn
pulls it all together
loved it
well done
john
nice addition.
oh yes... great ending
Thanks everyone!
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