by Masago: Rengay #6 (Oct 7-13), Verses 1-5 (of 6)
Yellow leaves / falling in the sun...like / flakes of snow.
Her lush blond hair — first gray pulled out.
Sudden gust... his toupee lifts off, over / the bridge rail.
We pass over, the muffler does not — railway crossing.
Lake-side autumn picnic — the boom box plays hits.
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5 comments:
there's no escape -- I can't stand hearing a radio at the park.
i'm with andrew
cheers
ditto boom box at park.
I prefer the melody from the wind.
that toupee has me curious
This is wonderful and whimsical, like the autumn wind.
Lovely!
more ugly noise... brrr!
but an interesting turn :)
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