by Masago: Rengay #6 (Oct 7-13), Verses 1-4 (of 6)
Yellow leaves / falling in the sun...like / flakes of snow.
Her lush blond hair — first gray pulled out.
Sudden gust... his toupee lifts off, over / the bridge rail.
We pass over, the muffler does not — railway crossing.
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7 comments:
very interesting add-on.
at least it makes the car sound like a hot-rod for a while :)
(you have my sympathy on the bill though)
All is well that ends well...?
Yuk yuk yuk.
tat's a noisy addition :)
Absolutely tore me apart.
Andrew: Thanks.
Floots: *LOL*
Borut: Yes... we'll see.
Aurora: ;-)
Polona: Very good. :-)
Richard: *LOL*
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