by Masago: Rengay #6 (Oct 7-13), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
Yellow leaves / falling in the sun...like / flakes of snow.
Her lush blond hair — first gray pulled out.
Sudden gust... his toupee lifts off, over / the bridge rail.
We pass over, the muffler does not — railway crossing.
Lake-side autumn picnic — the boom box plays hits.
Roadside vendor — cobs of corn overflow / onto the ground.
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4 comments:
Tumble, tumble, tumble! :) (And yes, that was Korean.)
love the way this returns to the first image
thank you
well rounded.
Thank you everyone!
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