by John McDonald (jd), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #35 (Apr 27 - May 3, 2008) Verses 1-6 (of 6):
First day out / learning to be a rabbit — tree-bark scattered. /jm
New postal job — he opens / a gate with "Beware of Dog". /vs
The young mother / gives the infant her breast — the crying stops. /jm
Erupting curses — the rookie mason nearly / hits his chisel. /vs
Another wrong note — she bangs the keyboard. /jm
He discovers how / to get under her skin: on, off... louder... /jm
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4 comments:
Would the theme be 'learning curve'?
we all learn by experience, don't we?
My first thoughts are first responses.
Thats probably much too simple.
Janice: Very, very close. Thanks.
Polona: For sure. ;-)
Pamela: First steps must be taken by us all. Thank you.
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