by Masago: Rengay #37 (May 18-24, 2008), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
Moon light — the cherry blossoms glow / bright pink.
The night light still on — yet the kids are grown up.
A lava lamp / from the flea market — comes on, goes off.
A lit butt / tossed out a car window — rolling, flickering.
A molten glass blob — shaped with each puff.
Sip of rosé / by a fireplace of embers — just you and me.
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5 comments:
much nicer than the last. :)
Ah yes this is lovely.
very cosy very nice
john
yes, there's a very nice feel to this one.
light is the obvious theme, but there's more... how to word it... transformation?
Andrew: :-)
Janice: Thank you.
John: Thanks.
Polona: Thank you muchly; I hadn't seen that but now that you mention it, I can feel that in some of the verses.
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