by Masago: Rengay #36 (May 4-10, 2008), Verses 1-5 (of 6)
Into the pond — the voices of several poets / grow fainter.
Setting sun — each croak / expressed with love.
Tree limb — morning rays, warm / on the back.
Chicken in pursuit — I barely escape under /the wire fence.
Stone outcrop — a fly / comes tantalizingly near.
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5 comments:
Well after the chicken pursuit I can see I had the wrong idea :) Am still working on it though...
love it, Mr Frog?
john
I feel like lashing out with a long tongue and trying to grab that fly :)
within tongue reach?
Janice: :-) (Rrrrriiibit....)
John: Rrriiibit...
Jem: LOL! (Rrrrriiibit....)
Andrew: (Rrrrriiibit....)
Polona: (Rrrrriiibit....)
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