2008-12-05
Renhai Reflections 52: Frozen Fun
Frozen Fun
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)
Our family
goes out to skate on
the frozen creek. /vs
Down the hill on cardboard, /vs
a boot comes tumbling after. /jt
On the frigid lake
my brother nudges our
homemade iceboat. /jt
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10 comments:
lovely winter scenery but oh so cold...
yes, i have noticed the renku-like verses :)
This is so cute...
I love all gradients of cold -- air, wind, snow, ice...all :)
Nice set, Masago...
wishes,
devika
lot of fun there
john
it's like little pictures in a photo album
came looking for new one..
will come again..
wishes
devika
cold, but a good one! :)
Well, that's what life is all about: frozen moments of fun!?:)
Too much winter for this far south.
Thank you all, and welcome to winter (up here). :-)
The middle one works so well - and perfectly captures a verse written by two - the first line setting off and that moment of not knowing what the second line will offer.
Good one both of you, and perfect for the season.
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