2009-03-08
Renhai Reflections 85: Keep Out
Keep Out
A Renhai by Karina Klesko (kk) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Crosswalk traffic —
three Hail Mary's on the way
to the other side. /kk
A tree's branches all bare — /vs
paint peels off the 'Keep Out' sign. /kk
No Smoking —
the "No" crossed out with
a felt marker. /vs
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0008.htm
[...another one from about a year ago. This one was written with Karina Klesko, one of the co-editors of Sketchbook.]
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
9 comments:
Scenes from daily life, Masago..
The first one made me smile and then laugh! :)
2nd and 3rd --
Signs on the road -- who cares about it....the keeper forgets about it first, the public seldom looks at it!! :)
wishes,
devika
The YES/NO crossroads of our minds!?:)
well done
john
ha, i like it
this one made me laugh! thanks :)
Thank you all!
This is good - love the images in all of them.
I like these - I love spotting signs and the changes that happen to there, with weather, wear or interference. And I love Karina's first one - I almost hear it light a song lyric in my head, it has great rhythm.
Hi, Vaughn sent me this link and it is nice to see the feedback .
Since the middle verse in a rehhai is established first, then the haiku , the first verse was fun becasue of the double meaning of ' other side' ......It was fun working with Vaughn and learning how to compose renhai, this may have been my first one. :)
All the Best, Karina
Post a Comment