2009-03-12
Renhai Reflections 86: Pilgrim
Pilgrim
A Renhai by Dr. Vidur Jyoti (vj) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
Frozen pond —
a faint figure approaches
through the fog. /vs
Each pattern glitters — /vs
a name in the frosted window. /vj
Misty eyed
she bids farewell —
fading moon. /vj
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http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0124.htm
[This Renhai was written with Dr. Vidur Jyoti who lives in India.]
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8 comments:
Lovely set, Masago
Nice to see the Indian collaboration :)
All three are good, the first especially was striking for the title..
and the last -- a very poetic imagery :)
wishes
devika
enjoyed as usual
john
a secret romance?
enjoyed this
These are wonderful verses - the imagery so sharp.
A perfect image of Maya!:)
beautiful --
Thank you all on behalf of Vidur and me.
Beautiful and wistful throughout. And (forgive my stereotypes) not what I might have expected from Indian haiku with the cool / cold images.
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