2009-03-15
Renhai Reflections 87: An Encounter
An Encounter
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)
The boy runs ahead,
pulling me by a long string —
I soar up-up-up... /vs
A violet friend comes near - /vs
we dive and glide together. /zh.r
Circling each other,
getting dangerously close —
down... down-down... /zh.r
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[This Renhai is another in the "another's perspective" style and was written for young readers.]
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10 comments:
Enjoyed this one, Masago
Very playful lyrics
wishes,
devika
I really like the ending!
A lovely story of the ups and downs for young and old!:)
Although this was written for younger readers it has much to offer older ones too. I like the emotion each verse carries.
a delight
john
I enjoyed the ride...
love it love it.
We're heading to the beach Saturday - Kite country.
And I'll think about this when we are dug into the sand, holding on
cute on a superficial level
and much deeper if one cares to think
Thank you all!
Pamela, now that'll be fun!
Polona, now that you mention it, I see what you mean!
This is awesome you two! What a delight to read.
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