winter night - city light reflects off overhead clouds
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[It is amazing sometimes at night in the winter here when it is overcast and the city lights reflect an orangish glow off the clouds. The light shines down on the snow on the ground and it feels like you are in another world.]
So, there it is, another world! I was beggining to have doubts!:) Unfortunately, I can't say that it's very deep, not even deep!?:)High is not the right word, I know!:) Okey, it's beyond the world of dimensions, beyond words!:) Seriously,I love it!:)
From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
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winter night -
city light reflects off
overhead clouds
Link with 890: City
[It is amazing sometimes at night in the winter here when it is overcast and the city lights reflect an orangish glow off the clouds. The light shines down on the snow on the ground and it feels like you are in another world.]
I always know when it is going to snow... because the clouds reflect pink...
I swear by it.
beautiful image
thank you
nice image
john
nice image
john
Yes. An abundant image... City lights!
So, there it is, another world! I was beggining to have doubts!:) Unfortunately, I can't say that it's very deep, not even deep!?:)High is not the right word, I know!:) Okey, it's beyond the world of dimensions, beyond words!:)
Seriously,I love it!:)
nice blend of urban and natural... enjoyed!
congrats on the best haiku in the WHR and all other excellent entries!
Another fine one!! Congratulations are in order I hear. Just left Bill's blog. Way to go Vaughn!!!
Tim: Thank you.
Pamela: Cool. I wonder if there is a scientific basis for that.
Floots: Thank you.
John: Thanks.
Tikkis: Thank you. Reminds me of some of your recent (semi-recent?) posts.
Borut: It is quite a world. Thanks.
Polona: Thanks mucho! Congrats to you as well...some great haiku there.
Pat: Thanks, and especially for your kind words on Bill's blog.
I don't get any like yours in my mind ? If just a few words, one or two of them, are the very same words, the whole text is not the same!?
A contrary, I like many variations in different haikus, they speak the same language but are different?
Tikkus: Are you saying we have written very similar haiku? I think that sometimes happens inadvertently.
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