by Masago: Rengay #11 (Nov 11-17), Verses 1-2 (of 6)
A crust of white / becomes a sheet of dew — early morning.
Steamed mirror — she applies / final touches of lipstick.
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6 comments:
nice jutaposition
much love
gillena
Nice one!
you bring up some vivid mental images!
like it
john
i love the way this one begins - two excellent images
Thank you everyone for your warm comments!
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