by Masago: Rengay #9 (Oct 28 - Nov 3), Verses 1-5 (of 6)
Revealing itself / upon a banana leaf — October wind.
Tree foliage descends — naked limbs emerge.
A battleship tattoo / under a sleeve rolled-up — blood-pressure test.
Fast-food server — my order taken between / tongue-ring flashes.
A rabbit-sized lump — the snake barely slithers.
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5 comments:
Very good progression, Vaughn. :)
even only seeing it through your words i shudder a little :)
cheers
nice
john
awwww... love it!
Aurora: Thanks.
Floots: I know the feeling. ;-)
John: Thanks.
Polona: Thanks.
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