by Masago: Rengay #11 (Nov 11-17), Verses 1-4 (of 6)
A crust of white / becomes a sheet of dew — early morning.
Steamed mirror — she applies / final touches of lipstick.
His canvas depicts / autumn colours — the essence / barely captured.
New jeans — that worn out look with / rips and tears.
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6 comments:
Hey, I love those jeans. Mine have been treated with espresso. :)
Yes, what about the essence? Man's essence...?:)
interesting
john
I'm trying to figure the theme. My brain has that worn out look this morning.
another transformation...blove it
Aurora: Espresso! Now that's original.
Andrew: Thanks.
Borut: Yes, another essence to meditate upon. ;-)
John: Thanks.
Pamela: :-)
Polona: You're a very clever lass! :-)
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