2006-02-27

566. Masses Held in Sync

rising moon--
giant masses held in sync
with precision

4 comments:

Pat Paulk said...

Has a "governmental" ring to it. Very good!

Masago said...

Good point...not exactly what I had intended. I have therefore revised "kept" to "held". Thanks.

jaydee said...

graphic

texas haijin said...

great haiku. i'm probably only at a little over a hundred, slow down i can catch up. i need to compile all my haiku and count some time, they are everywhere.