677. One of Those Days

long day--
a robin tugs on
a stubborn worm


texas haijin said...

short day--
the man in the moon
pulls the clouds closer

floots said...

very vivid image

Pat Paulk said...

Struggle for life! Excellent!!

polona said...

well done!
i've watched blackbirds doing the same thing (never wrote a decent haiku about it, though)...

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I like this!

Masago said...

dustin: the weather up there is dismall too then... :-)

floots: thanks there laddy!

pat: Right...for the bird and the worm, eh? Thanks!

polona: Thanks...must be a bird thing.

j. andrew: Thanks.

Bill said...

I can feel it.