2010-01-17

Renhai Reflections 160: Oblivious


Oblivious

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & John Daleiden (jd)

A dog barks
without interruption —
ants cross the road. /jd

Two standing soldiers — /vs
children play in the wreckage. /jd

Gridlock traffic —
the bicycle we passed before
is now ahead. /vs

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0208.htm

[We wrote this Renhai as a dual-language collaborative effort, see the notes for details]

4 comments:

Devika said...

Oblivious is a good title for the set...and i liked it, Masago and John :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

good work both of you
john

Bill said...

Nicely done.

Masago said...

Thanks all!