Renhai Reflections 181: Limit Encounters

Limit Encounters
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Jerry McKenzie (jm)

From the edge
a fly descends into
the peanut butter. /vs

Cycling the canyon rim — /jm
a squirrel crosses the bridge. /vs

The clothes line
naked but for three pins —
landing finch. /jm

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Renhai Reflections 180: Dispatching

Dispatching
A Renhai by Jerry McKenzie (jm) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

The shovel's crunch
sends mice scurrying
out of their nests. /jm

A sudden rythymic whooshing... /jm&vs
the honk of low-flying geese. /vs&jm

A first warming day,
the song of their return...
not in sight. /vs

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