2010-11-14

Renhai Reflections: Closer to an End


Closer to an End

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

Bit by bit
the jet trail above begins
to break up.

A skiff of frost on the lawn —
flies inside move slower.

A weathered plank
among tiny ice islands —
the gentle flow.

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6 comments:

Bill said...

A combination of gentle and intense. I like this a lot.

Devika said...

Enjoyed Masago...this and the previous :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

yes very good
john

Janice Thomson said...

I like the progression of seasons as well. Much enjoyed Vaughn.
Are the temps well below zero there too?

Masago said...

Thank you all, very much!

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