2010-11-14
Renhai Reflections: Closer to an End
Closer to an End
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)
Bit by bit
the jet trail above begins
to break up.
A skiff of frost on the lawn —
flies inside move slower.
A weathered plank
among tiny ice islands —
the gentle flow.
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5 comments:
A combination of gentle and intense. I like this a lot.
Enjoyed Masago...this and the previous :)
wishes,
devika
yes very good
john
I like the progression of seasons as well. Much enjoyed Vaughn.
Are the temps well below zero there too?
Thank you all, very much!
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