2011-06-19

Renhai Reflections: Seen Through


Seen Through

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

The popping begins
as the see-through pot lid
starts to steam up.

A Segway passes my way —
one head turns, then two.

I spill my soda
on the lap of the person
I step in front of.

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Correction: the middle verse should read, "A Segway passes...", see:
http://tinyurl.com/5t362yj

8 comments:

John McDonald said...

another goody Vaughn
john

Gillena Cox said...

What is seguay? i'm thinking some kind of bird is it that

much love
gillena

Bill said...

My dictionary doesn't have "seguay."

Masago said...

Ha ha, Sorry folks, try Segway.

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