2011-07-10

Renhai Reflections: Under


Under

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

One, two butterflies
flit blossom to blossom —
Rain forest.

Canopy of lilac blooms —
between bites, a sip of tea.

The sound of rain
on the umbrella, drops
form on the edge.

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6 comments:

Devika Jyothi said...

Very nice sets, Masago :)

'rain-forest' in first set,


wishes,
devika

Devika Jyothi said...

i loved it because its simultaneously summery and rainy :)

wishes,
devika

Ralf Bröker said...

I love line five: this melody comes straight out of my England-memories. Fine Renhai.

Best wishes
Ralf

John McDonald said...

well done vaughn
john

get zapped said...

I am there with the sounds, scents and scene. Fab!

Masago said...

Thank you all!