2012-02-26

Renhai Reflections: In Medias Res


In Medias Res

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & John Daleiden (jd)

in the natal ward
rows of infants waiting —
mid-wife trims her nails /jd

a leaf catches in her hair — /vs
first frost wilts the petunias /jd

a wisp of steam —
he flicks the used teabag
into the trash can /vs

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0302.htm

3 comments:

John McDonald said...

enjoyed this
john

Masago said...

Thanks John!

Gillena Cox said...

i find Verse 3quite surprising; but the linking extremely interesting


much love...