by Masago: Rengay #15 (Dec 9-15), Verses 1-4 (of 6)
River ice — a muskrat glides under / in silence.
The bank's wooded edge — a magpie swoops down.
Fort facing / fort... a snowball rises / high in the air.
Backyard rink — the puck sails above / a frozen lawn.
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7 comments:
My favourite sport. :)
Striking how, in this context, the puck seems almost weightless.
Ah, my hockey years on frozen lawns!:)
i'm envious
we never had it this cold
cheers
nice movement
john
almost surreal...
fine development
Aurora: It can be a lot of fun.
Bill: Yes, sometimes it "feels" that way. Thank you.
Andrew: :-)
Borut: He scores!!!
Floots: :-( Sorry 'bout that. :-)
John: Thanks.
Polona: Thank you.
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