2007-12-20

Rengay Through the Seasons #16 [1-5]

by Yvonne Myers (ym), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #16 (Dec 16-22) Verses 1-5 (of 6):


Shadow of a crow / on the snow in front of me — where's the bird? /ym
Fired from somewhere... a snowball finds its mark. /vs
Guarding / an empty doghouse, a frosty man /ym
The house key / slips out of my hand — fresh drift. /vs
A sudden sound, a sneeze — the bushes move nearby. /ym


Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

A raccoon with a cold? :)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very interesting!

Borut said...

It must be really cold up there... A sneezing bush!?:)

floots said...

mysteries
i love 'em

John McDonald said...

nice tension
john

Masago said...

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