by Masago: Rengay #15 (Dec 9-15), Verses 1-5 (of 6)
River ice — a muskrat glides under / in silence.
The bank's wooded edge — a magpie swoops down.
Fort facing / fort... a snowball rises / high in the air.
Backyard rink — the puck sails above / a frozen lawn.
A black, slippery patch — the brakes do their best.
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8 comments:
another one that paints pictures with each verse.
scares me to death!
Strangely poetic, the last one!
the feeling of separation/dissociation
really builds up
thank you
concise and clear image
john
We've had ice storm after ice storm here, so this is a propos.
im with floots on this one (and the series)
Pamela: Thank you.
Andrew: :-)
Borut: Thanks.
Floots: Ah, good observation.
John: Thanks.
Aurora: It is satisfying to be in tune with Nature. :-)
Polona: Thanks!
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