by Masago: Rengay #15 (Dec 9-15), Verses 1-6 (of 6)
River ice — a muskrat glides under / in silence.
The bank's wooded edge — a magpie swoops down.
Fort facing / fort... a snowball rises / high in the air.
Backyard rink — the puck sails above / a frozen lawn.
A black, slippery patch — the brakes do their best.
The puppy tries / to make it 'round the corner — waxed hardwood.
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5 comments:
love the image of the puppy skidding well done
john
loved this series
a senses of other dimensions/realities
and
of course
the need to "keep a grip" :)
cheers
I can see this! :)
great way to end this one.
John: Thank you.
Floots: Well done, as usual! Thank you. One needs to always keep a grip, especially on reality. :-)
Aurora: :-)
Polana: Thank you!
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