Rengay Through the Seasons #16 Summary
by Yvonne Myers (ym), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #16 (Dec 16-22) Summary
Shadow of a Crow
Shadow of a crow
on the snow in front of me —
where's the bird? /ym
Fired from somewhere...
a snowball finds its mark. /vs
Guarding
an empty doghouse,
a frosty man /ym
The house key
slips out of my hand —
fresh drift. /vs
A sudden sound, a sneeze —
the bushes move nearby. /ym
Our toboggan
hits a bump... kids ahead
begin to scatter. /vs
We started this rengay with the theme of "Where?" but as it developed we found "Snow" was the more prominent theme. Yvonne likes a rengay to tell a story so we also chose to write this rengay with a somewhat narrative tone.
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5 comments:
well done!
as I said initially - I so relate to each verse. Reminders of real life happenings.
GREAT!!!!
A Winter Tale.:)
both themes go well together with the season.
yes, well done both!
Andrew: Thanks.
Pamela: Thank you for your kind words.
Borut: You are very astute. ;-)
Polona: Thank you!
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