by Yvonne Myers (ym), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #16 (Dec 16-22) Verses 1-4 (of 6):
Shadow of a crow / on the snow in front of me — where's the bird? /ym
Fired from somewhere... a snowball finds its mark. /vs
Guarding / an empty doghouse, a frosty man /ym
The house key / slips out of my hand — fresh drift. /vs
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5 comments:
I have a story for each verse...it's like an outline for book!!!
Again, good progression.
good luck finding it. :)
i may be getting warm but this is one cold rengay :-)
Pamela: Yes, it does. I normally write rengay in a non-narrative fashion. However, Yvonne likes rengay to be on the narrative side so we decided to go with this one having a narrative character.
Aurora: Thank you.
Andrew: :-)
John: Thanks.
Polona: You are again getting warmer but on a different track. :-)
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