by hortensia anderson (ha), and Vaughn Seward (vs);
Rengay #44 (Jun 29 - Jul 5, 2008) Summary
Out in the Rain
At the pond —
we splash sun all over
each other. /ha
A birdbath out in the rain —
each drop bursts into many. /vs
Overflowing tub —
the toddler drenched from saving
"drowned water." /ha
Baby's baptism —
the minister also gets
a christening. /vs
Wind through the graveyard —
an elm scatters shadows. /ha
Poolside repose —
a vodka martini with
a splash of lime. /vs
The central theme in this rengay is "Splashing".
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6 comments:
With more than just a little water in it!:)
P.S.
In Slovenian, and in Russian probably as well, 'vodka' means 'little water'!:)
Thanks to Hortensia and yourself for a neat rengay series.
I thought of splashing but decided it was too obvious - next one I follow my gut feeling :)
i liked it very much to read theses verses!
these are my favorite verses:
"Baby's baptism —
the minister also gets
a christening. /vs
Wind through the graveyard —
an elm scatters shadows. /ha"
birth/death
humour/sad mood
best wishes,
Angelika
Borut: :-) Thanks for the extra info on vodka, how appropriate.
Janice: Thanks. Please feel free to post your ideas. :-)
HS: Thank you!
enjoyed the series... you two did an excellent job.
Polona: Much thanks!
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