2008-07-15

Rengay Through the Seasons #46 [1-3]

by Masago: Rengay #46 (Jul 13-19, 2008), Verses 1-3 (of 6)

After the storm... the ground receives a kiss / from the rose.
Our lovers' quarrel ends — the make-up smooch begins.
Noticed after / arriving home late — lipstick stains.


Click here for the previous rengay in the series.

8 comments:

Janice Thomson said...

oh oh - someone's got a lot of explaining to do... :)

Borut said...

A whodunnit!:)

Pamela said...

I definitely see a cause and effect going on here...

John McDonald said...

MMMMMM!!!!!
john

ArleneWKW said...

nice; also a very short story. And I, for whom the meaning of much poetry is elusive, understood it.

polona said...

yikes! :)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

uh-oh!! glad it's not me. :)

Masago said...

Thank you all for your comments. I have actually replaced this verse with something less sinister (see the July 18th post).