2006-06-13

688. Summer Fun

inner tube float--
i spin and look up to see
the clouds rotate

13 comments:

groundhogger said...

I've done a few haikus
This one about the sparrowas is my favorite of yours

groundhogger

Masago said...

groundhogger...thanks for your kind words. Actually I posted the haiku about two sparrows, but quickly switched it for this one about the inner tube. I did it so fast I didn't think anyone had seen it, but I guess you did. :-)
I'll post the sparrows haiku in a day or two. Thanks again.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I like the way that one sounds -- nice

texas haijin said...

enjoyed.

Tim S said...

Brings back fond memories, thanks.

Pat Paulk said...

I like the perspective of the clouds rotating versus you. Life is not reality, it is perspective. Good one Vaughn!!

Ryan said...

Another, "is the cup half full or empty piece" another worthwhile click to mnh...

Rose said...

I admire those who can write Haiku. I cannot.

polona said...

good one!

Masago said...

j. andrew: thanks.

dustin: I'm pleased you like it.

tim: thanks, this is based on some of my own very fond memories.

pat: thanks, you are right about perspective. What is amazing with this is that the inner tube is rotating silently and gently. When you look up, you don't feel like you are spinning and it really feels like the sky/clouds is/are rotating.

ryan: right.

rose: thanks.

polona: thanks.

floots said...
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floots said...

been in a spin for years
this sums it up so well
cheers
(deletion was me - typo!)

Masago said...

floots: *LOL*