inner tube float--
i spin and look up to see
the clouds rotate
About Masago
- Masago
- Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
- From "The Haiku Anthology" I became interested in Haiku and I have since written numerous haiku, senyru, and tanka. "Masago", my haiku pen-name, means "grain(s) of sand" in Japanese. I have recently started learning Esperanto and Japanese. A few years ago I developed a new eastern verse form which we now call 'Renhai'.
My Blog List
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Ice Can Look Nice5 years ago
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A Dream, A Prayer8 years ago
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6 Hantu yang Muncul di Toilet11 years ago
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distant thunder12 years ago
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welcome spring14 years ago
10 comments:
I've done a few haikus
This one about the sparrowas is my favorite of yours
groundhogger
groundhogger...thanks for your kind words. Actually I posted the haiku about two sparrows, but quickly switched it for this one about the inner tube. I did it so fast I didn't think anyone had seen it, but I guess you did. :-)
I'll post the sparrows haiku in a day or two. Thanks again.
I like the way that one sounds -- nice
I like the perspective of the clouds rotating versus you. Life is not reality, it is perspective. Good one Vaughn!!
I admire those who can write Haiku. I cannot.
good one!
j. andrew: thanks.
dustin: I'm pleased you like it.
tim: thanks, this is based on some of my own very fond memories.
pat: thanks, you are right about perspective. What is amazing with this is that the inner tube is rotating silently and gently. When you look up, you don't feel like you are spinning and it really feels like the sky/clouds is/are rotating.
ryan: right.
rose: thanks.
polona: thanks.
been in a spin for years
this sums it up so well
cheers
(deletion was me - typo!)
floots: *LOL*
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