2009-12-07

Renhai Reflections 151: Beyond the Pale


Beyond the Pale

A Renhai by John Daleiden (jd) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

Torn wallpaper
dangling in the breeze —
abandoned building. /jd

Desert winter blossoms - /jd
snake skin shed between spokes. /vs

Derelict bomber -
all but the engine between
stony outcroppings. /vs

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6 comments:

Devika said...

This reads like a movie script...may be I was watching "Rescue Dawn" the other night and some words and phrases in here brings to mind certain images from the movie :)

enjoyable, John and Masago :)

wishes,
devika

Gillena Cox said...

Verse one is stunning; and i loved the resonance in Verse Three

much love
gillena

Kristin Riggs said...

ooooh...love this! Torn wallpaper...if those walls could talk, huh? :)

John McDonald said...

very evocative
john

Masago said...

Thank you all!

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