Renhai Reflections 153: Between
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)
Snowy pines —
the squirrel again finds
his pine cones.
Two standing soldiers —
cigarette burning down.
Grocery line —
for the coming week,
provisions in hand.
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[This Renhai was written in Esperanto and translated into English (see the notes for the Esperanto version). It was also an experiment in a new approach to writing renhai. That is, each verse was written without concern for a theme, only about the links between each verse. With the linking itself, the focus was at the emotional level and less at the object or intellectual level. As it turned out, a theme emerged all on its own.]