Renhai Reflections 182: Concurrent


A Renhai by Gillena Cox (gc) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

the old shopkeeper
bagging a purchase; he greets
a new customer /gc

between the calls of a finch /vs
the street-sweeper sneezes, dawn /gc

the haunting echo
of a hidden distant loon...
I pass our lunch pack /vs

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John McDonald said...

well done both of you

Ralf Bröker said...

Well done, indeed. It is clearly happening in my mind.

Best wishes

Janice Thomson said...

The images present themselves strongly - very much enjoyed.

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Pamela said...

of course I love the bird references.

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