2010-09-12

Renhai Reflections: Familiar Smells


Familiar Smells

A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)

I peek out the tent...
in the dark by the garbage,
two shiny eyes. /vs

In the flowers, an odour... /jt
the mutt charges in. /vs

Early morning —
striped figures skulking past
dew-laden roses. /jt

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5 comments:

John McDonald said...

lovely - atmospheric
john

Ralf Bröker said...

My eyes walk through this scene - and suddenly I feel like in a church: "mutt charges" and "dew-laden roses" - brilliant.

Best wishes
Ralf

Masago said...

Thank you all!

Janice Thomson said...

My thanks too.

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