2010-09-12
Renhai Reflections: Familiar Smells
Familiar Smells
A Renhai by Janice Thomson (jt) & Vaughn Seward (vs)
I peek out the tent...
in the dark by the garbage,
two shiny eyes. /vs
In the flowers, an odour... /jt
the mutt charges in. /vs
Early morning —
striped figures skulking past
dew-laden roses. /jt
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8 comments:
lovely - atmospheric
john
My eyes walk through this scene - and suddenly I feel like in a church: "mutt charges" and "dew-laden roses" - brilliant.
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Ralf
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