2010-09-25
Renhai Reflections: A Measure
A Measure
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)
Veterans chat
outside the grocery store —
boxes of poppies. /jt
A cluster of large mushrooms — /vs
the World War ll movie ends. /jt
Military funeral —
the General's badges hang
a little heavier. /vs
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8 comments:
well done
john
Between the lines I find the spirit of marching boots and drums - without any romantic idea but the knowledge of what had happened, happens and will happen. Good one.
Best wishes
Ralf
whew... a little heavier heart, too!
This was also too interesting for the astute observation in the third...that i haven't noticed it ever, makes it all the more :)
again, love the veterans chat beside poppies,
wishes,
devika
Janice -- again, I miss you "Drinking the Moon" Blog :)
** that i haven't noticed it ever, makes it all the more :)
I know I am not seeing the same general...but the haiku had a universal appeal to it :)
wishes,
devika
Thank you all!
My rather late thank you too.
Devika - the blog is back :)
Great article as usual. A big thank you for all you us share.
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