Renhai Reflections: Feline Follies

Feline Follies
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Can opener —
a purring, furry brush
against my leg. /vs

The pulled-back bed covers — /vs
the cat burrows deeper. /jt

"Nascar track" -
a paw under the couch swipes
the racing dog. /jt

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[This renhai is the sixth and final in a six-part series... check the notes for details.]

Renhai Reflections: Ups and Downs

Ups and Downs
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

First warm day —
his tongue round and round
an ice-cream cone. /jt

Ripples on snow-melt puddles — /vs
an icicle disappears. /jt

Riding up
toward Eiffel's top —
warm breeze. /vs

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[This renhai is the fifth in a six-part series... check the notes for details.]

Renhai Reflections: Hurry Scurry

Hurry Scurry
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Breakfast dishes
remain on the table —
banana peels. /vs

The pulled-back bed covers - /vs
kimono half on the floor. /jt

Tax appointment —
on the hood of the car
my coffee cup. /jt

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[This renhai is the fourth in a six-part series... check the notes for details.]