2011-04-10

Renhai Reflections: Hurry Scurry


Hurry Scurry

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

Breakfast dishes
remain on the table —
banana peels. /vs

The pulled-back bed covers - /vs
kimono half on the floor. /jt

Tax appointment —
on the hood of the car
my coffee cup. /jt

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0268.htm

[This renhai is the fourth in a six-part series... check the notes for details.]

5 comments:

John McDonald said...

nice one
john

Bill said...

I like it. It captures effectively those moments of unfinished business.

Devika said...

Good sets, Janice and Masago...agree with Bill :)

wishes,
devika

Masago said...

Thanks!

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