2011-04-10
Renhai Reflections: Hurry Scurry
Hurry Scurry
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)
Breakfast dishes
remain on the table —
banana peels. /vs
The pulled-back bed covers - /vs
kimono half on the floor. /jt
Tax appointment —
on the hood of the car
my coffee cup. /jt
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0268.htm
[This renhai is the fourth in a six-part series... check the notes for details.]
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5 comments:
nice one
john
I like it. It captures effectively those moments of unfinished business.
Good sets, Janice and Masago...agree with Bill :)
wishes,
devika
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