2011-04-16

Renhai Reflections: Ups and Downs


Ups and Downs

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)

First warm day —
his tongue round and round
an ice-cream cone. /jt

Ripples on snow-melt puddles — /vs
an icicle disappears. /jt

Riding up
toward Eiffel's top —
warm breeze. /vs

Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0269.htm

[This renhai is the fifth in a six-part series... check the notes for details.]

4 comments:

John McDonald said...

another good one
john

Bill said...

Very good. The elements interact most effectively.

Devika said...

Good sets, Janice and Masago...missing Janice already at her's :)

wishes,
devika

Masago said...

Thank you all!