2011-04-16
Renhai Reflections: Ups and Downs
Ups and Downs
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Janice Thomson (jt)
First warm day —
his tongue round and round
an ice-cream cone. /jt
Ripples on snow-melt puddles — /vs
an icicle disappears. /jt
Riding up
toward Eiffel's top —
warm breeze. /vs
Click here for notes and linking details:
http://cflat7.drivehq.com/Renhai_0269.htm
[This renhai is the fifth in a six-part series... check the notes for details.]
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4 comments:
another good one
john
Very good. The elements interact most effectively.
Good sets, Janice and Masago...missing Janice already at her's :)
wishes,
devika
Thank you all!
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