Renhai Reflections: Fast Reactions

Fast Reactions
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Zhanna P. Rader (zh.r)

Bursts of fireworks —
quick flashes illuminate
people in the crowd. /vs

In the night, cracks of thunder — /vs
her boyfriend storms out red-faced. /zh.r

Contemplating
a nudist Black-Sea beach —
your joke cracks me up. /zh.r

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