2011-09-10
Renhai Reflections: Beyond the Reach
Beyond the Reach
A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (vs) & Gillena Cox (gc)
stepping into a bus —
I recognize the face, but
what is her name? /vs
the stone skips eight or nine times — /vs
a cat scampers up the tree /gc
bright moon —
the shadowy street under
dimly lit lamps /gc
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4 comments:
nice one you two (incidentally we still have that telepathy I wrote a haiku identical to the one you published on my web one day last week re the branch springing back only mine was a plum branch)
john
Congratulations, you two. This really sets the imagination going.
Kaminabend -
diesen Kiesel
ließ ich fliegen.
This haiku (fireside chat -/this pebble/I let it fly) from november 2010 crossed my mind when I read you fine collaboration.
Best wishes
Ralf
Thanks all!
John, great minds...?
Ralf, cool; leaves one to imagine where the pebble ended up. :-)
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