2011-08-21

Renhai Reflections: Some for All


Some for All

A Renhai by Vaughn Seward (Solo)

Rose bush —
two or three wilted among
the pink blossoms.

A hot sidewalk in August —
Bubble gum covered with ants.

The last mile
on the trail with the group,
my knee says, "stop!"

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6 comments:

John McDonald said...

know the feeling vaughn nice one
john

Pamela said...

that was so vivid in my mind -- like you read it there or something!

Masago said...

John, Pamela: your words are kind... thank you!

Devika Jyothi said...

came reading 'fast reactions' but i liked this very much, Masago :)

wishes,
devika

Gillena Cox said...

nice, Vaughn; seem you'll walk as far as your knees say; and why not come a time we have to listen :)

much love...

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